Tuesday, August 7, 2012
One lonely robot
Suddenly the tall gates creaked open. I thought to myself I wonder if I should or should not walk in. Then I think for a moment maybe when I walk in I will see other lonely and rusty little robots exactly like me.Maybe I would meet some of my family and maybe I would make some really good friends. I really really hope I meet my family and make some new friends.Curiously I looked around the shed. In the shed I saw some other rusty robots just like me. Except taller then me. I looked at them even closer, then I thought that they were my family. Then one of the robots said come over here son I’m so glad to see you again.He said come and play with your brothers.
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